V.2 You Promised

You promised you’d never hurt me. Yet I sit here with tears grazing my cheeks. You say it’s going to be O.K. But will it? You know the feelings I have for you, yet it’s not enough. You’re “confused” and that kills me. You say it will be fine and I pray to God you’re right.

You Promised V.1 55 word story

I changed the entire thing so don't pay any attention to the other one!

You promised you’d never hurt me. Yet I sit here with tears streaming down my cheeks. You say it will be O.K. But will it? I told you I like you, and yet it’s not enough. You say you’re confused and it kills me inside. You say it will all be fine and I pray to God you’re right.

55 word story v.1

I wrote this in like 5 minuets so it's not that great

“What does love mean to you?”

“It’s a comforting feeling that is so sweet. It’s something unbreakable and irresistible. It’s a life long commitment that I’m willing to hold onto for as long as I live. And when I look into your eyes, that’s not only what I see but what I feel.

I should have said more v.2

It didn't change much but here s v.2

I Should Have Said More

When you were her on earth

I should have appreciated you more.

To know one day

You would leave me forever

I told you some things

But I should have said more

If only I was given one more minute

I would have done things better

I would have told you how much you meant to me

And how I loved everything about you

From your darkest nights

To your brightest days

Your gorgeous smile that shone so bright

And your beautiful laugh that was music to my ears

I loved your words of wisdom

And your life lessons

How every time we fought

We made up, like we were good as new

Nothing could stand between us

We were unbreakable

You were and are still my best friend

And the best there could be

If I had one more minute

I would make it last a lifetime

Just by saying I love you